Wednesday, November 16, 2016

More offending passages...Bonnie Edwards

Here I am again, digging through Invitation to Christmas to see what else the automated content scan at iBooks and Kobo finds offensive.  https://books2read.com/Invitation-to-Christmas

I think you can see where this passage is going!

He still wanted her so bad he could taste it. But she held on to the notion that this thing between them would blow out like a candle in a draft. The longer he knew Jordyn the more he understood that candle would always burn.

Family or not. It wasn’t as if they were real step-siblings who’d been raised together.

He hefted his backpack and the takeout bags from their favorite restaurant and headed to the exit that led to the elevator. She knew he was there and his belly tightened in anticipation.


It was time they talked about where this friendship was going, and he hoped it was to bed.

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Can we say conflict? (discussion with her bff - yes, a heroine for the future)



Jordyn shook her head. “It’s stupid to think about more with him. We’re both too busy, live too far apart and will be related in September.” She couldn’t believe she’d even talked about kids. But it was clear he’d gotten her message. She wanted to settle down, so this was definitely a short-term thing.

“Step-siblings created in adulthood don’t count as siblings. It’s not as if you grew up together. You’re both fully functional adults whose parents just happen to be engaged.”

“Break-ups can be hard on family members. People get attached to their children’s partners and miss them when they’re gone. Except Tom wouldn’t be gone and neither would I. We’d have to see each other at every family event. Tom and I are connected and socializing is unavoidable.”

This happy Christmas novella has been caught in a very wide net by this automated bot. 

It's my newest release and for 99c it's a steal! Don't let this nice little book stay on the naughty list. My hope is to bring enough attention (ie. sales) so that iBooks and Kobo WANT this book on their sites!

Possible? Maybe...with your help. You can buy it here for Kindle, Nook and from Inktera:


5 comments:

  1. Good grief! You'd think if these companies were actually going to ban books, they'd rely on an actual human to read the books instead of an automated system. Clearly no one has done so with yours! I'm so sorry you're going through this, Bonnie. Wishing you lots of sales!!

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    1. Thanks Ros! I've been vindicated now...both sites have Invitation to Christmas on sale now.

      Marie Force went on my behalf to Kobo's director of self-publishing & author relations who took it to Dan Wood at D2D and asked them to take another look.

      Kobo published with 90 minutes of her email and in the wee hours, Apple published the book too!

      Problem solved!

      Whew!

      I always say people are very willing to help if you just reach out, no matter the issue. Marie has my deepest gratitude.

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  2. Good luck, Bonnie. Be sure and keep us posted about any developments.

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    1. Thanks so much for all your support with this Joan! Marie Force went on my behalf to Kobo's director of self-publishing & author relations who took it to Dan Wood at D2D and asked them to take another look.

      Kobo published with 90 minutes of her email and in the wee hours, Apple published the book too!

      Problem solved!

      Whew!

      I always say people are very willing to help if you just reach out, no matter the issue. Marie has my deepest gratitude.

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  3. I'm really glad you got the problem resolved, Bonnie!

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